I think love can be a beautiful thing. It happens everyday, yet when it happens to us we treat it like it’s the best thing that’s ever happened to us, and the truth is, it is. I don’t know about you, but I know what it’s like to be totally head over heels for someone, and I know what it’s like to be rejected for someone else. I’m not judging anyone for leaving me. If you didn’t feel the same way, then there’s no reason why you should be forced into a relationship because you feel bad for me. I was hurt, and I did cry, but I picked myself up again.
Anyways, I’ve been thinking alot about love lately and what it means to me, and me with my inner author, I had to write a poem about it. So, without further ado, I give you my most romantic poem so far.
SKY
If sunsets are proof that endings are beautiful
Then I want to be a sunset with you
And if your crown were to topple and fall
Then I’d want to lose mine too.
Our sky is so tragically beautiful
A graveyard of stars, a graveyard of hearts
The darker days makes them brighter
Helps me remember they’re here.
Hold me close under a thousand stars
Hold my hand and I’ll hold your heart
Cause darling right now we’re together
Cause darling right now we’re forever.
Every time you leave I break into a million pieces
Every time you leave I hate the reasons.
And I know you’re going to leave someday soon,
So, when you leave please take me with you.
Oh my goodness!!! Everytime I read this poem I cry so hard, so if you did too, no judgement. It just means alot to me. Before I end this I just wanted to add a few more beliefs of mine about love.
- I believe in saving your purity
- I don’t believe in same sex marriages
- I believe in love at first sight
- I believe that when you get married it should be forever
- I believe that love can ALWAYS triumph over hate
What are some of YOUR thoughts on love? Why? Be sure to comment below!
xoxo,
Noel White
How long did that take to make? 😮
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The actual poem took about a half an hour. When I’m feeling inspired it doesn’t take alot to express myself. Just a pen and paper.
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Wow! That’s awesome! 👏
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Lovely poem! I like how you gave love multiple sides, darkness mixed with light.
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Thanks T. Shaw! I really enjoyed writing it!
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Its Awesome Noel. I guess its first from any of your sensual ones. I just loved the way you wrote. I actually donot believe in love at first sight. I also believe that whenever we love it one step before betrayal. rest of your points I too agree and so do not believe in same sex marrige.
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Thanks Shreya! It’s totally okay if you don’t believe in the same things I do! And I’m glad that you feel the same way about same sex marriages!
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Honestly, same gender marriages sound weird to me. No offense to anyone! 🙂
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I don’t believe in them because they go against the Bible!
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Lovely poem! I also really like that you listed what you believe when it comes to love—I share many of those same beliefs. 🙂
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Thanks Nichole! I’m glad you liked it!
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Wow beautiful poems and emotions conveyed here in this post. Thank you for sharing it. Also how brave of you to say what you said at the end, I applause you and agree with it all.
All the best,
Lissa
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Thanks Lissa! I’m glad you agree with me!
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I love the poem ❤ It's so beautiful. And I also agree with your values about love. That's why I don't date at 16 since I'm not planning to get married at this age xD haha at times I kinda wish I had a boyfriend but it's better to wait!
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Thanks Rebekah! I agree with you on the note that you shouldn’t date someone until you think it’s who you want to marry, but sometimes I get caught up in the moment…still working on that! 😉
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Beautiful poem! I don’t agree with some of the points at the end, but I’m not here to judge or hate. ❤
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Thanks!
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I loved it!! Beautiful :))
Even I recently wrote a poem named ‘He says,” Do you love me?”‘ Please do check it out! 🙂 Would mean a lot to me.
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Of course! I’d love too! Thanks Dhwani!
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